Guys, I just published my first article...

i know this is completely pro pacquiao but i just wanted to ask how my writing was... this is opinion based also not like a news article sort of thing. this is not bad for a past time i guess...

https://bleacherreport.com/articles/318023-pacquiao-vs-mayweather-breaking-down-the-accusations

you can see some of my opinions from the article here in covers and youtube but i guess i got tired enough to make an article... haha

I'm not saying you can't speak/write English like a native speaker but the grammar could be polished a little.

"Manny Pacquiao as humble as he is, has enormous ego too, and by the way Floyd Mayweather is acting would a Manny Pacquiao just say yes to what ever Floyd Mayweather says?"
Very... friday night bartalk level you see.

Legible text, just not "Professional journalist" standard yet.

but im filipino and my first language is tagalog... but that does not excuse me though... this site is actually not the professional type of sites its just like a site for a hobby... something like that i think?

im not pursuing or has not studied journalism or writing though i am a pilot and i just wanted to start a new hobby of some sort after hours and hours of posting in covers... hehe

i appreciate your comments though! i will try to improve on that...

Good write-up sadly this is all we have to work with. Basically pick a side show your reasoning and such no one can get mad at anyone for taking a side because BOTH FIGHTERS are protecting themselves.

Just so you know Nevada doesn't go a good job testing the drug in question cannot be detected by urine, and can easily be beat by blood if  timed properly.

Post fight doesn't help Floyd is Pac-man is GUILTY..  would still be his health in the ring.

Remember any athlete who we hold HIGH in this world is subject to what Pac-man is going through.

Michael Phelps broke many records to a point he was seen as "Half man half fish" and the other athletes accused him of everything, remember the "Swim trunks fiasco"

"That's why he has the extra speed". He was also tested many times right before swims which for the duration are the most grueling of any sport.

If you look at almost every sporting record... almost all involve cheating/illegal something.. Baseball's Home run record was broken by Barry Bonds  on STEROIDS.

NBA refs fixing games so they can win.. almost ever football player on Steroids!  It's America's Culture .. we want our athletes "BIGGER FASTER QUICKER"- it always comes at a price.

I would have posted on your blog but there are a few people going at it. so I won't post there.

Glad I could contribute the Pac-man Video from '05.   Hope people truly realize "Perception is Reality".  

 

i am thinking of making one for mayweathers side but i have to do more reading since the biased man that i am... 

you can make an article i have read some of your long comments here just some minor fixes and you can make one though just for fun

someone there posted this:

Dr. Catlin heads the UCLA Olympic Analytical Laboratory said in 2003 that currently, to be convicted of an EPO offense athletes must test positive for EPO with the urine EPO test. The whole interview here.

https://www.letsrun.com/2003/epoqa.php

IN 2008, USA today published an article saying, The current HGH test, introduced before the 2004 Summer Games, has yet to turn up a positive result for the substance in an athlete

https://www.usatoday.com/sports/2008-05-27-hgh-cover_N.htm

Another articale of USA today published in 2008 reporting breakthrough in determining HGH through urine test. Then what the USADA us talking about?. It is no brainer to smell something fishy with their statement.

https://www.usatoday.com/sports/2008-07-22-hgh-urine-test_N.htm

Didn't read it. As you said, the writing is subjective and subjective works are always the same.  Objectivity is how its done, you leave it up to the reader...let them decide.